The Tales Of Arcmadia: Leo
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- Profiel gecreëerd: February 2007
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hey. I have written a new paragraph for the first chapter. so read it ^^
also tell your friends to come and read it.0 Commentaren 959 dagen
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Steph114 weken geledenPlease read my work, I think you'll like it, it's about elemental Dragons
No Elm had ever disobeyed their law, neither of their own people nor the law between the Elements of the land and boarder. But soon everything would change…the thousand-year-old law would be broken…and the uprising a new war would begin…
http://www.bebo.com/The-Border
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Corza133 weken geledengood shit !! keep it up
x] I really enjoyed the prelude. Only one problem--your grammar is a bit of a mess. I'd really like to see where this story is going. You have a particularly effortless writing style. I'd kind of like to read more.
door Michelle Lokket 92 weken geledenKudos and good luck!
And, if you have the time, would you mind reading mine?
www.bebo.com/farfromanyfairytale
Intersting plot You have started the story magnificently.
door Steph 114 weken geledenThere are a few typos and grammar errors however. And the sentances need to be spaced out a bit more evenly. A whole lot of sentances chucked into one huge paragraph is a bit much and usually puts readers off to reading it. It is good however and I would like to read further as it has great potential.
Keep up the good work
~Dragonkeeper~
awsome its grt! rely intriging and has som humor wich iz always gewd!
door J A F F A 129 weken geledenread mine please im a newbi 2 this stuff! and please comment and review!
http://smokeintheskies.bebo.com
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very very.. gud, i think?
door -Evil-Owl-Chld- 130 weken geledeni havent actually read it cos i h8 reading, but it looks amazing - never NEVER give up...
hey! that definetely desreves a four at least!!!
door Brian Byrne 137 weken geleden