time for war
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- i'm writing this book for my granddad who fought in the war for king and country who sadly died a year ago
sorry about my punctuation im not very good at that i'm still only 13 and ive got ideas so comment
oh ye alex you are mean a 3 cause y i wrote this storie you have NO! respect for my dead grandad i thought he was a hero in my eyes
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Jimmie OliverIl y a 93 semainesHey fellow-author,
If you are a self-respecting bookworm, then you could do a lot worse than read through extracts of my new book on www.bebo.com/JadedGoodie The 288-page publication can be ordered from Amazon.ca or Waterstones and is due out at the beginning of March.
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Reece FIl y a 110 semainessounds good nearky all the men in my family during the second world war fought in it they were desert rats. soliders. r.a.f if you write a book i will buy it
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Ethan QIl y a 120 semaineshey talk about iwo jima. got family in the 2 flag rasing.
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Nik NikoraIl y a 120 semaineswar is brutal peace is boring
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Giovanni I Pwnd UIl y a 123 semainesLEAVE ME A COMMENT PLZ
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LongshotIl y a 123 semaines
I liked your stories. Your skin is pretty cool too, so I'm gonna use it! bye...
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BurntFacemanIl y a 124 semainesGreat for your age. I think your grandad would be proud and i also think that if you stick at the war storys you will defo get better. Im 14 and in the middle of a war novel, i think its 140 pages so far. Write back on my bebo page and when ive finished my novel ill let you know.
Fruitless Wars I Know U may feel sad at the loss of your Grandfather but could I suggest that you trace the history of the War to end all Wars WW1. And young men llike you and including my Great Grandfather fought and died over a few yars of land , and ask yourself was it worth it
par Robert M Il y a 72 semainesok its canny cool but you should look at your grammer, if you can get all your ideas into a sensibal order then it should be really good
par Bad Wolf Il y a 104 semainesit's good i like it alot.
par Daniel Coen Il y a 107 semainesWar Well done you have really captured the feeling of war in this story. I'm sure your grandad would be really proud keep it up!
par Jennifer C Il y a 108 semainesthe things you've said have touched me.. i'm inspired.. THE COUNTRY HAS DONE ESO MUCH, AND YOU'VE REALLY CAPTURED THAT AND EXPRESSED IT AS IT SHOULD BE.. WE ARE IN DEBT, WHAT YOU HAVE DONE IS AMAZING. I LOVE YOU.
par Camel Carcass Il y a 113 semainestouched i was very touched by this story because my great grandad was in the second war and he just died in janury of cancer
par Ally. H Il y a 113 semainesalso i think it was realy kind of you to wright a dedecation
gud very emotional and vivid keep up the gud writing and am a fan of war movies ,stories bye
par -Twilight- Il y a 114 semainesUr book I read thebook and it is very good, for an 11yr old u have done your Grandad proud telling this Story.
par Saz. Il y a 117 semainesI wish you all the best in finishing it, and one day if you work hard enough you may even get a copy published.
=] Thats really nice of you...to write a story for him! This country is truly in his debt! for fighting for us!
par Piggy. Il y a 119 semaines[[the story is amazing aswell...well done!]]
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[[AND TO THE GUY SAID HE GAVE YOU A 3 FOR [WHY] YOU WRITE THE STORIES, MATE I WOULD GIVE THEM A 1000000 IF I COULD!
I THINK THE REASON THAT THEY ARE WRITTEN, MAKES THEM ALL THE MORE BEAUTFUL!
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