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1 it's just a few tests 2 thank you for signing up 3 wake up old chap 4 the falling woman 5 the sickness 5 the sickness 6 the stand

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  it's just a few tests I like the use of dialogue in the story, it has a screenplay type of quality to the writing.
  
  
  

  przez Roy Pyper 111 tygodni temu
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  na na crap jj gooooooooooooood
  

  przez Pimp With A Limp 121 tygodni temu
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  Good This isn't bad don't be put down by negative comments becuase you don't care and I don't care. This shows some imagination and if I make a suggestion less dialogue more narration!
  
  Have a read of my story please:
  
  www.bebo.com/evilnights

  przez Conor 124 tygodnie temu

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  Ruth Keogh

  ur a fuckin fudgepacker
  
  GAYLORD
  
  

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  Victoria S

  hey sup

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  JoJo.

  GAY!

  134 tygodnie temu