What You Don't Know
- Profielbezoeken: zo terug
- Profiel gecreëerd: April 2007
- www.bebo.com/watudontkno
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- Detectives/Thrillers
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About the author
I am a 12 year (soon 13) old girl. I wish to be writer when I am older.0 Commentaren 941 dagen
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Joe113 weken geleden....This is the story of a hitman in england. We follow the 19 year old 'Carter', as he calls himself as he works for various shady charectars, killing whoever he is told to.
http://bebo.com/the-hit-list07
Small Problems.... It's A Good Start, A Few Spelling Mistakes In Staling In The Second Para. But I Enjoyed Writing When I Was A Bit Younger. The start seems a bit rushed, perhaps you should have started from when the man saw what she looked like and her mum calling her?
door C'M 99 weken geledenBest Wishes,
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=) Hey,
door Brittany 119 weken geledenI reli like ur story, ur a great writer!
Take a look at my page and tell me what u think?
http://www.bebo.com/Profile.jsp?Memb...
Would luv 2 hear ur opinion, thanx heaps and keep writing!
nice SOOOOOO much better than wat i cud do!!!
door Mary 134 weken geledenwhat u don't know I like my 1st chapter
door Its Only Life 134 weken geleden