A Story Untold
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- www.bebo.com/Secrets-Of-A-Soldier
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- Me, Myself, and I
- Passion.Drama.Heartbreak
Three common words. Such a long explaination.
In my nine chapters, you will be able to feel what it was like to be in the war, both emotionally and physically and maybe even psychologically.
Using my knowledge of the war, and also my passion and naturally good writing skills, have created a short diary story of a soldier from WW1.
From tear-jerkers to courageous laughs, they move you all the way into the soldier's life.. touching your heart, and changing your views forever.
Read and see what you think.
I'm fourteen by the way.
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youngwriters23 weeks agoThis is a group for young writers to post there stuff and get constructive critism.
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Healing Hearts50 weeks agoTHIS IS THE AUTHOR OF THIS PAGE.
this is my new book if your interested in reading.. its biography based
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L.T.John K53 weeks agoHi
.My granda da fighted in Ww1
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Jimmie Oliver90 weeks agoHey fellow-author,
If you are a self-respecting bookworm, then you could do a lot worse than read through extracts of my new book on www.bebo.com/JadedGoodie The 288-page publication can be ordered from Amazon, Blackwells or Waterstones and is due out at the beginning of March.
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Stephen Moynihan107 weeks agoif ur into writing wateva style r type join d gruop u just set up leave a comment and ill put up ur stories thanks http://www.bebo.com/Profile.jsp?Memb...
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The Fox Company108 weeks agonotin bd 2 comment about
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John D114 weeks agoExcellent story & deserves all the credit you receive. Been to the Battlefields & makes it easier to picture the events & locations.
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Mizz Chloe-Louise Nicola Cherry121 weeks agoomg bbz ur so talnted like bbz
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Nik Nikora125 weeks agoTrying to look 4 hitler have u seen him
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Marnie126 weeks agoJess you know your a good wee writer. ignore those shit stirrers on down below. there just jealous of your amazin talent like!
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M e Lee127 weeks ago
Hi did you research this ? its very good for such a young person and interesting ... keep it up....
But broaden the description and maybe places ie Somme.
by the way my fammily are from Havant many years ago.
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Mizz Chloe-Louise Nicola Cherry128 weeks ago
here what is ur problme the wee girl enjoys writing and ur coming on her page and slabbering get laugh just casue she is smart and ur not fuck off :@
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Mizz Chloe-Louise Nicola Cherry130 weeks ago
this is a brill wee site and the wee doll who wrote that story is my best freind lol she is so talented with her writing
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by Calum Flay 32 weeks agoGreat I live it I'm a big fan of war stories. this is great! I felt like I read a book by a pro writer!
by Peter C 69 weeks agohttp://www.bebo.com/Joseph-Cummings
brilliant those stories are absolutely brilliant!!!!
by Blake A. 102 weeks agoA good read For someone of your age to write about a topic like this, with such passion, shows some promise for today’s youth. I enjoy war stories as well as having studied the first and Second World War history from school till today, but have never read work on the subject from a female before. I often read work by people three times plus your age, that are not half as good as your work Its great that you have done something rare with some flare and I wish you well with your future work, as I think you have real promise as a writer.
by Mr. Skahoovey 105 weeks agoIf you ever want any advice on getting your stories published, or need some info on WW1 or WW2 for a story, please ask and I will help where I can. Don’t be put off by my profile, its just my twisted humour...lol
Superb!!!!!! amazing jess...i always knew u had it in u!!!! ull do grt things wif ur writing!!!! ill be expecting some of the royalties!!!!! no,, i joke.....excellent and full of emotion!! grt work
by Van Dort 117 weeks agoi did not read it but i saw it is gd !!!!!!!!!! i did not read it but i saw it is gd !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by Shane Cummins 119 weeks agoVery Impressive Some very mature, heartfelt stuff in there. To be honest its quite shocking to find this coming from someone who is only fourteen, if you keep going the way that you are then you have a great future ahead of you. The potential is very much apparent now.
by Kyle Spence 120 weeks ago