Teen-terror
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- Data creazione: July 2007
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- this book is about a 16 year old girl named Halley Parker who was young drop dead gorgeous, smart,very populer, and the ultimate party girl! her parentsHad divorced two years earlier and she lived with her mother most of the time. Her mother was a fun loving go-getter,the kind of mom is super coool,But her dad was not he was the kind of dad who was all up in your buisness,all ways nagging you about how you NEED to get into harvard!But thats a different part o the story she was doing perfectly fine in school she had already almost enough credits to graduate. Until one night at a party she did something horribly wrong.....
Read on to see what happens
chiudi Sondaggi
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Should Halley hook up with brian in the future chapters?
- No
- yes
- Absoulutley
- Heck no
- UH duh it was meant to be from the very moment he was introduced into the stroy!!!
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Would you tell ppl my book was:
- ok
- awesome
- one of the best things youve ever read
- a lame excuse for a so called "book"
- or the absoulute worst thing you have ever ever ever ever read in your entire life
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The love story of a goth couple40 settimane fa
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River Samules103 settimane faAlthough your story is fine it's obvious that you havent looked at it since you posted.
Half of it is one giant sentence filled with gramatical errors, that actually make this tedious to read.
Your speech marks are all over the place too...
The story is fine but if you just spent a couple of hours checking over it you would find your reviews become alot more enthusiastic.
also try spacing out your work so theat its not all one chunk of writing, that way people wont be put off -
The Great Escapist.106 settimane faive not read it yet
but im guessing from the profile
and the titles of the chapters
that its about a girl
who goes to a party
gets drunk loses her virginity
and gets preggy??? -
Gavin.110 settimane faim actuly 18 if i new u i lik u u hot!!
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Vile-Oner112 settimane faTHAT GIRL IN THE PROFILE PHOTO IS FUCKING HOT
Interesting This book really touched me it was great
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It was cool i guess I liked the way it was written (though some of it was hard to read), but i found it a bit predictable. I kinda guessed what was gonna happen as soon as you said the word 'virgin'. Sorry. But apart from that it was really cool.
di Kayley 112 settimane faPoor I'm sorry but I was put off a lot by your first paragragh and didn't even finish chapter 1. Your simile in the 1st paragragh doesn't make sense, you have often used a comma to carry the sentance on where it should clearly end, the whole thing just doesn't make sense. You have the imagination for writing but just no the skill. Sorry for the bad review but i wasn't going to lie.
di Jonny Havron 112 settimane faThe boook ! = ] I would love to read more !
di Scones.Ox 112 settimane faI love these sort of stories ... aswell as others.
But this was a good story.
Although .. Some of it made no sence Because it was a little bit wrong but .. It was good !
Keeeeep going
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Spelling It shows that you put little effort into this piece. The spelling is awful and the grammer is also poor. Use a spell checker next time.
di Bruce Harper 114 settimane fareview I don't think there was one sentence in this whole story that was written gramatically correct.I guess the story as a whole was okay,but there's no way that this girl could have found out she was pregnant THE MORNING AFTER. Anyway,does she tell her parents,does she tell Blake....or does she decide that she'd rather be with Brandon?The story left too many questions to be called complete.Sorry.
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