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please visit my page... no one has because i havent properly advertised myself. Its called 'brotherly love.' give it a chance. =]

It's a bit like Darren Shan, but better

I have to wait a few weeks before posting anything else about my book. My American friend has been helping me out with it, by being my editor. She has a copy of the edited version saved to disc, but she needs time to go hunting for it. I have a hard copy on paper, but it's the first draft which wasn't edited yet. There have been some major changes made too, so yeah, I have to wait.

Yes, you've been VERY helpful, so thanks for sharing the information with me.

Thanks for the handy hints. Did you read the previews I posted to my blog today?

Cool Buzz! Thanks for your help. Do you have to post it all in one hit, or can you edit & add to it later?

Can you please explain in simple easy to understand steps how you published your book on here with the format you've used? I saw the option for registering a book, but I don't know how to use it. How did you end up with a chapter heading list that links with the content? Blah blah, I'm sure you know the drill. Feel free to pm the info to me if you'd rather respond that way. Your help will be greatfully recieved thanks.

Thanks for your response to my comment about your book & I wish you all the best with getting it published. Do you have any recommendations of publisher's who'll accept books like ours?

WOW! You've inspired me to re-write my book onto here. I didn't know you can do that. My book is about a Vampire family. Looks like I'll be hogging the pc on Monday, while my son is at school, so I can complete my project. I'm not published yet either.... are you?

that was amazing!!!
u should finish it and publish it cause i would totaly buy it.

brilliant work ian excellent work u should publish it

Hey fellow-author,
If you are a self-respecting bookworm, then you could do a lot worse than read through extracts of my new book on www.bebo.com/JadedGoodie The 288-page publication can be ordered from Amazon, Blackwells, or Waterstones and is due out at the beginning of March.
Best wishes to you

Good story preferred chapter 1 and 2 than the end part.. alot of description which makes you want to read on...
Well Done!!
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hey nice story i just started writing to check out my book! Um whos that sorcerer guy he copy writes his story so dont listen to him i think u did awesome tell ur friends about my book!! and Kasey Jo's blood moon!
ps loved it!

Watch that you don't contradict yourself: "My eyes fluttered lifelessly into action!" You might try reading your story out loud, just as it is actually written, and not as you meant it to be. This will frequently reveal simple errors, etc.